Third short story

I’m now editing the third story about a child from a broken home in a future authoritarian society.

I’m dithering about the start of ‘Times of the Changes’ the second book in the Supremacy trilogy. Whether to throw Brad into the middle of a battle right from the off, or be a bit more subtle about it and lead him to it after discovering a ‘cleansed’ world where there shouldn’t be any. I’m thinking of going for the action start to grab the reader’s attention.

Took a trip to the beach (about 10 minutes away) with the dog this afternoon as the sun was going down. Fantastic sunset. Took a few photos. Had to post some of them.


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